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POEM : FIRST LOVE

Postby arti » Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:16 pm

I ne'er was struck before that hour
With loveso sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.

My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.

And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.

I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.

Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.

I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart has left its dwelling place
And can return no more.


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Postby 2sweet4u » Sat Jan 14, 2006 5:11 am

Wow. Nice poem.
Priya.
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Postby yudelei » Mon Jan 16, 2006 5:22 am

so beautiful lines

but whom it is for?
Don't cry for me
'cause I'll find my way.
You'll wake up one day
...but it'll be too late
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Postby megrisoft » Mon Jan 16, 2006 7:07 am

I think That is Personal. right Arti.
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Re: POEM : FIRST LOVE

Postby subisa852 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:22 am

Another poem that talks about first love, hope you'll like it

You were the one
by Mistake
Here upon my bed i wake
and turn on my side for one sake
the sake other my lover sweet
who only yesterday i did meet
on that cold and fog day
there was nothing i could say
my tongue was caught
at my one thought
how beautiful she was
and i only say this because
the first time i looked into her eyes
it brought about a slow demise
of thoughts of anger in my head
and i remember what i said
i called you my angel from above
sent so i could give my love
your mouth hung open at you surprise
then you thought i was telling lies
of how sweet you were
yet you had to learn
they were no lies i told
i wanted you till i was old
then your train came yet you didn't move
so i stayed too so my love i could prove
i started with your eyes of grass
sat in crystal clear orbs of glass
then i moved onto your hands
and such finesse they did command
then onto your hair of silk
softer then any quilt
next i complimented your legs so smooth
and watched the sexy way they moved
then onto your lips shaped sweeter the a dove
and suddenly you kissed me with your love
i felt warm i felt bliss
from your sweet and tender kiss
the way you made my legs go weak
its a stronger word i seek
stronger then love itself
i had something worth more then wealth
this thing would last forever
this would not end not never
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